Two Sentence Rulelemmy.blahaj.zoneimage sidekickplayah ( @sidekickplayah@lemmy.blahaj.zone ) 196@lemmy.blahaj.zone • 8 months ago message-square15fedilinkarrow-up1353
arrow-up1353imageTwo Sentence Rulelemmy.blahaj.zone sidekickplayah ( @sidekickplayah@lemmy.blahaj.zone ) 196@lemmy.blahaj.zone • 8 months ago message-square15fedilink
minus-square summerof69 ( @summerof69@lemm.ee ) linkfedilink3•8 months agoWhat’s the purpose of the grenade then? He poisoned her, then blew up with a grenade. Why?
minus-square Alice ( @Alice@beehaw.org ) linkfedilink3•8 months agoIt’s supposed to be a one-two punch. You’re expecting him to kill her with cyanide, but it turns out you were mistaken! Then he kills her anyway This kind of joke can totally work in a well-paced comedy, but not a two sentence horror. It’s a stretch to do it in two sentences.
What’s the purpose of the grenade then? He poisoned her, then blew up with a grenade. Why?
It’s supposed to be a one-two punch. You’re expecting him to kill her with cyanide, but it turns out you were mistaken! Then he kills her anyway
This kind of joke can totally work in a well-paced comedy, but not a two sentence horror. It’s a stretch to do it in two sentences.