There needs to be another box in there that is not connected to any of the other boxes. Just because. Like it was going to be part of the story but lol no.
“tetris, can you come over? it will just take 10 minutes because I cant shift because of my back, and you were the one that put the bed there if you remember, and your aunt is coming on the third…”
vs.
“tetris, can you move the bed if you’ve got 10 minutes? My back hurts and your aunt will be visiting.”
I actively avoid talking to people like this. Please just say the thing
I can’t help it despite trying.
Same when you’re talking and I have something to interject.
It becomes painful
I know, that’s why I avoid talking. It’s better for both of us
So, I told you that story to tell you this one…
this is totally how i would write stories if I ever came to writing
Then read AntKind by Charlie Kaufmann. Or watch his movies.
ill check it out
Source: https://adhddd.com/comics/
“Ending from a vaguely related story”
I see you’ve read Neal Stephenson
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