Written by Kirsten Beyer & Davy Perez
Directed by Eduardo Sanchez
Logline
Returning to a planet that dredges up tragic memories, Captain Pike and his landing party find themselves forgetting everything, including their own identities as he confronts a ghost from his past.
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Annotations up at https://startrek.website/post/282663.
This was a very TOS episode yet in terms of feel.
The dialogue could easily have come from the mouths of the TOS cast, and the situation on the planet reminiscent of officers violating the Prime Directive like in TOS: “The Omega Glory” or “Bread and Circuses”. Even Mount’s delivery when on the planet was Shatner-esque.
I can readily imagine Kirk, McCoy and a random redshirt or Chekov on the planet in Pike, M’Benga and La’An’s place, and Sulu pulling it together like Ortegas.
I agree that it has a genuine TOS feel.
Especially as it gets back to the mid 20th century thought experiments around how the mind functions, but informed my more current understanding of memory, cognitive function and emotion.
I wasn’t quite sure the balance of the scenes was what it could have been, but it was good to see all of the main cast having their moments. I was nonetheless frustrated that Number One was quickly sidelined once again.
Also I was uncomfortable with how far Pike was willing to go in his aggression in order to get information from Zack. I believe we’re supposed to feel that, but it did feel that it was pushed just that moment longer to drive home the point that Pike’s deep ethics are what keeps him in check, not his emotions. It also tracks with his anger and how he even used it to break the thrall of the Talosians in The Cage.
But overall, I liked it. It’s a deeper and more challenging episode than it may seem on the surface, first watch. I suspect it will be one that stands up over a longer horizon.
hmm. This makes me wonder. Is there a way to link to a specific message thread, that is universal across instances?
If not, it seems like it’s a feature that is sorely needed.
Yeah theres a sort of goofy way memory loss works and how it was still taken very seriously gave me a good old school trek vibe which I dug throughout the episode.
Wow, these SNW writers really bring it each week, don’t they? Not to say every episode is perfect but I’ve found every single one to be very entertaining and exactly what I want out of Star Trek in 2023. The combination of standalone stories mixed with underlying character development and arcs is perfect.
As for this week, the idea of encountering a planet that could make you forget everything was weirdly creepy, if not a bit implausible. Even if this wasn’t her showcase episode, I grinned at Ortega’s “I AM THE PILOT!” moment. Also enjoyed the away team being out of sorts on the planet which I thought was well done and not an action overdose like the season opener.
SNW really is a masterclass in balancing episodic and narrative storytelling.
I’d love to attend a workshop/lecture with Goldsman, Myers, et al.
Memory loss is one of the scariest things in the known universe. This is a horror episode to me.
Similar to how we refer to TOS episodes as “The Nazi Planet” and “The Gangster Planet” this one will be “The Alzheimer’s Planet.”
Ok, at the risk of sounding like a filthy casual, it’s only now when I’m digging into Memory Alpha that I realized we’re finally getting visualization of what Pike was so miserable about in TOS the Cage. I was like, why does Rigel VII sound so familiar…
This is the kind of retcon I live for!!
I like that the original away mission failing wasn’t some weird magical thing - it was just a mission that went bad in a fairly mundane way.
That’s probably one of my favorite episodes of the series as a viewing experience, it was pretty entertaining. I don’t think I quite track…the message, though? In the span of about three minutes we get explicitly told that for Pike and Ortegas the memory loss could be revealing experience that identified the core of the self, while for their friend on the planet it was an obscuring experience that robbed him of things he didn’t know were important. You can explain away the difference with plot logic pretty easily, but thematically it’s a bit weird to juxtapose them right next to each other
Was the high pitched ringing sound really necessary, especially for that long each time? That almost physically hurt and it scared the fsck out of my cat.
@BorgDrone @ValueSubtracted As a person with tinnitus, it seemed important to me. Let me know exactly what was going on. It’s also very common in video games, for example when someone is dazed by a nearby explosion. Again it conveyed a lot of meaning to me and helped explain what they were going through.
Sure, but there is a difference between having that sound at low volume for 2 seconds and blasting it through all 10 speakers for 20.
Ooh, look at this guy with ten speakers! Fancy pants over here! : P
It seemed a perfectly harmless and appropriate volume to me listening on headphones. Perhaps your bass needs adjustment.
It’s not the bass that was the problem, it was the high pitched sounds.
Yeah. I watched with a loved one who needs hearing aids, and I can vouch that that exact pitch plays havoc with high-tech hearing aids and apparently results in actual physical pain. We finished the episode with the sound way down, reading the captions to understand it. It’s fine for 99% of people but I would have appreciated a warning for the 1% that experienced actual pain from that.
This episode should have started in media res, with the away team already on planet and having lost their memories. Once we got the explainer as to what was happening, then we could return to the Enterprise to show the growing crisis there, and finally wrap everything up as the episode already did.
No… I juste have a hate for most of the Trek episodes starting with a catastrophic situation and a blackout with a “XX hours ago…” captions…
Top easy writing… At least, they build the tension here
I couldn’t agree more. It feels like lazy storytelling, and I actually appreciated this episode for not resorting to that kind of fakery. It’s setup was strong enough to be its own thing. I respect that a lot.
Thoughts as I watch:
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So, I’m wondering: is Cayuga a reference to Rod Serling? He named his production company that in reference to the lake in New York.
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Relationships suck when you are a Starfleet captain who knows your destiny to one day be in a beepie chair.
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Rigel 7, a deep cut!
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We have gone (ZERO) days without some sort of Starfleet prime directive problem.
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Finally, some Ortegas action!
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“THE HAT IS SUPREME.” I’m going to have to use that in conversation.
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Oh man, at least she keeps the hat.
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“Subdermal universal translators” are the new translation microbes
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Oh boy, they have starfleet tech.
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Ah, we’ve got a good old-fashioned “Federation citizen takes over a world” episode!
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“This is a cage.” Heh.
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Forgetting is a scary side effect for a planet.
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I get that they were only on there for like four hours, but shouldn’t they have noticed stuff like this their last visit? Or maybe… THEY LOST
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“Welcome to Memento/50 First Dates Planet”
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Can still remember how to fight!
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So I’m guessing Spock is probably one of the more resistant to all of this due to his Vulcan-ness.
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Man, La’An is having a REALLY bad pair of weeks.
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Captain Pike even without his memories is still Captain Pike. Makes sense.
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Okay, I guess Spock isn’t immune.
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Glad to see the Connie class had GPS.
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I gotta admit, I feel like Pelia would be good in this episode given just how many memories she has to lose and how many skills she has.
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SHE FLIES THE SHIP
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The ship’s computer is great this week.
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Damn, that is some tough silverware, standing up to phaser blasts.
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Is it just me or is that a fresco or whatever of Alexander the Great… Zac-ized?
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Okay, that logic doesn’t quite seem sound, but whatever.
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So, uhm, be careful about telling her about the Beepy-chair, Chris.
I thought it was Cuyahoga? correct me if i’m wrong pls
It’s Cayuga, as per the closed captioning, and it’s likely no coincidence. As I noted in my annotations, the Cayuga first appeared in “A Quality of Mercy”, which shares a title with a 1961 Twilight Zone episode starring Leonard Nimoy. And TZ was produced by Serling’s production company, Cayuga Productions.
Yes, I noticed that in your annotations over at… the other place. Interestingly enough, Roddenberry spoke at a memorial for Serling in 1975
I post them as a stand-alone in c/DaystromInstitute every week now.
Thank you!
shares a title with a 1961 Twilight Zone episode starring Leonard Nimoy.
For better or worse, I’m not sure “starring” is quite the right description. Nimoy has like three lines and a couple minutes of screen time. I found it rather jarring to recognize Nimoy early in the episode and then see so little of him after.
Featuring, perhaps.
The platter cracked me up.
Ensign — “captain…sir…this directive says all away teams will be issued a Pfaltzgraff serving set for protection?”
Pike — “trust me on that one.”
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I’ve been waiting for the crew explore a new planet. Hoping there’s more of these episodes than less
At the start of the episode, when Ortegas was getting ready for the away mission, I thought this episode would have the scene from the start of the season 2 trailer where she (gleefully) pilots a shuttle down to a planet.
At least we know she will eventually get to go on an away mission!
Enjoyed this very much, the tone was very creepy. Reminded me of the psychological horror episodes only TNG really did.
I would link it back to psychological mystery of The Cage and further to its touchstone, the MGM 50s classic Forbidden Planet.
I mean its a little far fetched a simple helmet protects the kmal yet the enterprise hull let it through no problems (until pack modulates the shield), but wont let that get in the way of a good story.
their helmets are made of a special ore that blocks the radiation. it’s a goofy explanation, but there is a reason why they act differently than the enterprise hull
A very TOS episode that I thoroughly enjoyed!
Can we let La’an have a few happy moments in this season? That woman must be riddled with PTSD by now.
It was great to finally get Pike back! Has he ever told his girlfriend that he’s almost certainly going to be disabled? What a pickle he’s in. I think if I were in his shoes I would have let the relationship end. The guilt must be driving him insane.
I feel like they might be messing around with the timelines so that they can save Pike from his horrendous fate and just say it’s an alternate timeline compared to TOS. Normally I’d be against that, but it’s Pike and I love him so much that I almost want them to do it.
The nature of a time crystal is that it’s a fixed event in every timeline forward.
Once Pike drew the crystal on Borath, it was locked in.
Thanks, I should know that, I’ve seen every episode!
In a kind of sad way he does have a happy ending. I just don’t want it to happen to him. Poor old Pike!
It’s a common trope that the away teams really shouldn’t be landing in these planets without any idea what’s down there without an alien style hazmat suit and here we go, another example :) I GUESS they get a pass because they were here before and the effects didn’t happen because they were not here long enough
also really strange they don’t confirm that people were dead? Or try and go back and get their bodies which might have equipment/ com badges /might even be alien (Spock was there and he bleeds green), maybe starfleet shouldn’t be so careless about what they leave behind…
No EV suit would have protected them, either - the Enterprise was affected as well.
They handled that subtly - I was wondering why they didn’t raise shields against the radiation, but the shimmering impact of the debris field seen when Ortegas was in her quarters showed that shields were indeed up, so that mean the radiation could get through shields. Then it was mentioned that Spock tweaked the shield harmonics at the end - I guess he didn’t earlier because he was already affected.
I think at the time they lacked sufficient information to modulate the shields, which is why moving the ship into the astroids seemed logical.
Outside of Pike and Batel’s relationship, are there any points in this episode that look to connect to anything else in the currently ongoing plotline in SNW? I didn’t really notice anything, it seems like this might be the most standalone episode.
Batel’s promotion was nixed by Judge Advocate Pasalk because of her conduct during Una’s trial in “Ad Astra Per Aspera”.
M’Benga mentions that the reason he and La’An were along was because Pike needed people who could fight without phasers (as per “The Broken Circle” and “Tomorrow and Tomorrow and Tomorrow”).
That’s basically it, I think.
M’Benga
You mean “Dr. Seen-Some-Shit.”
I don’t know if we’ll ever see a full episode with flashbacks to everything he’s been through, but oddly enough I don’t mind the intentionally vague references to it so far–leaves it open for our imaginations (and fan fiction) to fill in the gaps.