Much credit to this post.

  • The USSR had great success in many areas

    The PRC struggled during the Great Leap Forward

    You seem to be papering over the part where a shit ton of their own people died, so I don’t think this really works as a pitch. You’d need to find a way to ensure that mass death wouldn’t happen again, and then succinctly express it.

    Mao was only about 70% good

    Anyone who does mass executions is a fucking monster. Probably better to leave this out of the pitch.